All Comments on 'Bed of Rose's Ch. 03'

You know, for an Alpaca, and an evil one at that, you're bloody good at writing lesbian erotica. Hope you continue the story

...I'm now reading instalments to see what happens next. Pretty rare for me to bother with characters, so congratulations on gaining my interest. Only minor criticism is some of the synonyms for vagina - if I was reading it for arousal I worry I'd burst out giggling!

...read the story parts one through three.

Wow!! What a beautiful story. Thank you alpaca!!

I'm blown away at how well you built up the characters and the love shared between them. A fantastic story all round.

Brilliant!!! ;-)

story. to good to end. there must be at least FIVE more chapters to go

I do love the way you tell a story. This one is particularly good and a definite favorite. And while I agree that this is a good place to stop, a sequel would be a very welcome addition. Perhaps detailing a college graduation, the building and decorating of the extention, and of course the sexual initiation of the new room(s). The possibilities are truly grand. Please keep up the very good work

Wow do ilove happy endings, i.e. beginings. :) thouraly enjoyable charactors with love romance and a bit of adventure :) koodos!

Most stories have minor meaning. There is not much to them. I feel that this is a story that someone has experienced. Although probably fictional, it was heartfelt. It is one I enjoyed the most. To the author, keep writting. Some people do enjoy a good story. It kept my intrest.

Evil That was an amazingly beautiful Dramatic, Romantic story. THANK YOU

I found it so well crafted and the reactions of the parents believable. The sex was relentless at one level, but erotic at another. Sometimes I wanted more subtlety but overall a great piece of writing.

Loved the characters, and I'm happy Charlotte's mom accepted Rose and helped her in the end. And the sex was great too. :) I had to laugh ... I know a Robert Jones in real life (doesn't everyone?) and he IS a little weasel! ~ L

Please continue this

Great story!!!

Awsome story alpaca, i really think with a little more work you could have your stuff published professionally! like others I wish you'd continue this story (like previous commentors said theres lots of room for more) but as its been several years now I guess this is a good stopping point. I was sooo glad to read such a happy ending.

"Rose was definitely the "butch" of the two, though she was still highly feminine." What does that mean? How does that work exactly? We need more specifics.

One of my favourite things about your stories is the way most of them are connected. I have read this story about three times, and have only recently realised that Rose is mentioned in Full Moon Strays.

...until I had read all three chapters before commenting. Overall, a very enjoyable story, well crafted with the ends of Chapters 1 & 2 leaving the reader wanting more. Unlike some of your other readers, I think the story reached its natural end. Perhaps bring Rose and Charlotte into other, different, stories as minor characters but their story is finished (and don't we all love happy endings!"). The one sour note for me was the anal play which I don't care for, but hell... to each his or her own, right? Five well-deserved stars EA.

This was the best chapter of the series. Made me happy made me sad made me cry. And the sex was mmmm so delicious.

Is that then a lucky punch? ...... Grandparents might be more foreseen happenings and so the unexpected happenings are may the most intense ones ........ Ten stars for this fab tale 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Hope you can still get the thanks you deserve for such a great story, now I've found you will enjoy reading so much more