All Comments on 'Bedding the Babysitter Ch. 04'

Loved it, more pleeeeeeeeeeeeese . Dave xx

Once again your stories leave me begging for more...as always i look forward to the next chapter of this and so many of your other serials as well as new submissions and begging and submission is something i relish winkwink.

Another great instalment cant wait for part 5

Thank you. I had been wondering when this chapter would be posted. I am looking forward to Ch. 5 with Karen and Jenny's mothers submission. Yummy. Also, looking for the next "party" at Le Chateau.

Chapter 4 was a long time coming, but worth the wait. Please keep this story going. I so look forward to more of he adventures of our submissive heroine.

Great scenarios and descriptions.

ooooohh, that was an evil place to end the chapter.....i really hope you release Ch 5 soon!!!!

I have to say I have loved this story. I just found it and have for the first time read the story from the first chapter to the current in one setting.

Hope to see more soon.

you keep getting better and better. LOVED IT!!

--J

well you know you cant just leave us hanging like this ;)

although i think you should finish some old ones too while your at it. i hate seeing unfinished stories

commented on the first day wooooo!!! suck on that literotica fans!!! :D

why, lol, why end it there. well have fun and hope to see chapter 5 up soon ;) loved it there needs to be a 6th star ^_^

I loved it! Anticipation is so very erotic. I'd started writing this chapter in my imagination, wondering how it might go. The bookstore scene was a brilliant transition. I'm on my mobile, so I have to stop, but please don't you stop writing.

This just keeps getting better and better and I can't wait for chapter five. Great job!

Wow, this could be the hottest story I have every read! Can't wait for next chapter.

It ended just when it was getting good!!!!

Please please continue this series. Its so good. Please make chapter 5.

please continue writing this story , i loved reading every chapter, an excellent read, please write some more chapters

please continue, awesome series

Please continue with the seduction of Mommy. You have created a wonderful seduction story from start to finish. I want to hear how mom succumbed to Karen. Make it as steamy as possible please. Thank you for the wonderful story so far.

great story. I hope you conntinue with this. It is awesome.

Absolutely fabulous! A pure erotic joy to read!

I'm dying to know who gets to submit to Rosie and gets their face pissed on as a condition of their relationship?????

excellent story so far,please continue soon

I loved the double dildo section! I was dripping wet just after I finished reading that section!

Your stories are always so real. They leave me begging for more. You got to tell us the entire story of 'mommie slut' and her seduction by Karen. I would love to read about Jenny becoming her mother's mistress. As a cheerleader Jenny will go to many parties, perhaps her mother will come along as well and satisfy the frontline of the football team or the entire basketball squad. I am sure Mistress megan has a use for her.... SexTeacher

I loved all the chapters. I would have hoped for a better ending, not hanging on like this but now I will be waiting for the next chapter like everyone else. Hurry up! Don't wait to long so we don't lose interest.

Loved it, all except the part with the mom, could definitely have left that out completely, and why so little about jenny and Ashley?

WE WANT MORE!!!

Thanks to all the people who have read, voted and enjoyed this series, it is very flattering!!! Yes, I do have plans for a part 5 (Mom's story) and part 6 (the date). That said, writing these sequels have been very challenging (part 4 took me 4 months and three re-writes).

I hope to have part 5 out in early 2011...but am currently having writer's block for this series...(writing sequels is tougher for me than starting a whole new series)

So if u have any suggestions, drop me a line...I don't promise I will use it, but I sure will listen...

Kisses Jasmine

you are really an artist ! go on ...I love this story...thanks

Great story, so hot. Had me really wet again. Thank you so much.

Wow, this series is getting better and better keep up the good work!

This is beautiful story. Loved reading about her finally getting it on with her teacher and the love that radiated from the story when Jenny spoke with Ashley.

As always, keep up the flow; we'll keep reading. Why? You know why. You are a marvelous writer and your stories are hotter than molten iron.

The book delirium and the ending made me cry

I love it !! Can't wait for the next one ! That ending is fantastic

Though I don't comment on here much I have to do it here. This story in it's entirety is amazing, and it definitely pleases the little sub in me that I don't let out quite as much as I should. That cliff hanger at the end was brilliant but I'm so glad all the chapters are out, I would have gone insane waiting for an update.

~ Shy Valentine xox

I was wondering when or if Jenny had a mom and when would she find out Jenny 's secret. So glad it is now out in the open.

pretty much flawless, imo.

These are so terrific. So hot.

When I read your stories, I feel some times that I wish I had tits and a pussy. The sensations must be exquisite. Of course I get a partial sample during my own pussy licking episodes, but I dream about what it must feel like to receive such stimulation. Thanks for being so vivid.

LOVED the Stories in Text.. PLEASE.. ADD more text here..!!

MMMmmm.. LOVE the Interesting stories..!! MORE.. Please...!!