All Comments on 'Bedmate: A Sister in Need'

"kissing her luscious lips, suckling her tasty tits, and licking her clammy clit"

But on the other hand the flow of the story was hard to follow. A lot of the description got in the way of the story line.

it would have been better if you started at the begining and moved forward. most writers here forget to remember "KISS-KEEP IT SIMPLE STUPID" think about a rewrite and use a good editor from now on.

Very Fun und Romantique!

11/10!!!!!