All Comments on 'Been Waiting for Love Ch. 03'

I like this story, its getting better! keep up the good work!

Love this story!! Thank you for writing for us here...

This story is just tooo hot! Good work girl. Keep 'em coming.

I love this story it's just so amazing and those two are H-O-T, hot but I just can't help but think about how much Ricky is going to freak when he finds out. Can't wait for more with these two.

..for more! This is really good. Please keep writing! <3 Lillian, KR.

I think you have a good story to tell in spite of the melodrama and other problems. <B><I>I'd like to read it.</I></B>

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There are some major problems that you can get help with:

<BR> 1- Your grammar and vocabulary are poor

<BR> 2- Your characters both black and white all

<BR> read/sound black

<BR> 3- You desperately need at least two editors,

<BR> maybe three, one black (female) and one

<BR> white (male). The third would be black

<BR> and male.

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<BR>melodrama mel⋅o⋅dra⋅ma

<BR>  /ˈmɛləˌdrɑmə, -ˌdræmə/ Show Spelled Pronunciation <BR>[mel-uh-drah-muh, -dram-uh] Show IPA

<BR>–noun

<BR>1. a dramatic form that does not observe the laws of <BR>cause and effect and that exaggerates emotion and <BR>emphasizes plot or action at the expense of <BR>characterization.

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

i thought she was a virgin still, the way she kept saying she waited 11 years. im happy the way it turned out so far. i know thats unreasonable to assume but it would have been sweet for a love story. lol. (adventures of a 29 yr old virgin) keep writing ma'am you do a god job at it.

Hot stuff, watch out~

funny scene the morning after. I thought she was a virgin, too from the way she and her friends acted.

Fourth time reading.this story

That was probably the first story with the worst errors ever.

Don't get me wrong it was cool just that i didn't like the fact that the chick was going for the guy.

Anyway that's just me and my opinion and you din't ask for it.

This is one the stories that you can always reread and still love it. I think ive read this maybe 10 at least n still in love with it.

This is such a great story. Forget the haters

That was hot...I love the team work it took to sneak her out of his room

I love this story. Its my first time reading it and its now 3:01am and I'm still chugging along. Thank you for your story