All Comments on 'Beetlesmith's Ch. 05'

by dresbach

Sort by:

Newest First Oldest First

1 Comment

RedJohnny almost 14 years ago

Glad you came back to this

This story is a fun read and well written. I'm looking forward to more adventures and the tension of dealing with the consequences of using the potion.

Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ

Post as:

Anonymous

dresbach@dresbach

49 Works

394 Followers

Reading between the lines - it is the curse of every writer and the duty of every reader. Erotica without porn is just tawdry fiction. Porn without erotica is just boring. My reaction to porn films is as follows: after the first ten minutes, I want to go home and screw. Afte...

Live Webcams 319 Online!