All Comments on 'Behind the Lines of the Were War'

I hope you don't wait too long to post. thank you.

This is my first time writing a story of any length. I'm part way into Chapter 2 now, and sketching out the later chapters.

I thought in this series I would explore the darker side, one in which the wolves and humans can't live together.

I don't think I've read one where the humans discover weres exist. I have read ones where they think it is inevitable that they must come out to humans but they take a very optimistic approach where they plan to approach and educate the humans in top government positions and then come out to the rest of society which I always thought was ludicrous. This darker storyline is unique and seems a much more likely scenario if humans learned about weres. well done.

Really good...!

Lead to genocide. Once you eliminate humanity it is too easy to justify extermination.

Can't believe it's been 30 years since you've written and it's a wonderful start for your first chapter. If you need to talk or want some advice, you know where to find me...

It was submitted on 3/30 and should be up soon. Fair warning, later chapters will be delayed as work will be all-consuming for a while.

Please continue to provide me feedback, criticism or encouragement, I'm still new to this.

A really good start to an imaginative and unique story. Plus you can write and spell, which keeps the story flowing. My unsolicited suggestion is to avoid breast measurements, which make me think "teen boy". Lots of words can give us a picture of large breasts: large, voluptuous, heavy, round, full, etc.

Yves

I can't believe it took me so long to discover you. Mind-blown. Moving on to chapter 2.

Wow! This is such a unique take on the werewolf genre! I LOVE your writing! On to part 2!!

Wow a fucking nuke, fucking humans.