by marriedpervs
As always a very hot story. well paced and nicely descriptive. If anything we could have done with more. keep it up
Great action adventure. Pity about that idiot, anonymous. Someone should tell his mother that he's trolling the internet again.
Just come across your story. Well writen and structured, plenty of action but spaced well. Even better it is writen by an aussie. Off to read the rest of your stories.