All Comments on 'Bella's Japanese Gameshow Pt. 01'

sick mind

I'll definitely continue to read to see what happens.

It's not often that I see a style of story I haven't seen before on this site, erotica normally seems to be pushed down a few standard naratives with some minor details and the skill of the author being the only real difference. This story (at least what we've seen so far) is interesting and I really do want to see more. It's not a complicated novel or a indepth character piece, no, instead what it is, is high quaility, imaginative erotica and I'm glad I read it.

5/5 stars

loved it. can't wait for more.

Completely gross :/

I'm loving this story. Can't wait to find out what else they do to Bella.

Really enjoyed it and hope you bring out another chapter.

I await Bella's subsequent humiliation with relish!

I got so wet holy shit never read anything like it, please post more!

This is simply awesome love it. I love massive cum fetish like this. And an unwilling girl omg I am soooo turned on . More, I can't wait for more

Please go on with this story. God damn, I love it!

This is totally different from 90% of the other stories here. Please continue.

Everyone Reading This Are VERY Lucky! Her Humiliation, Pain, Confusion and Her Public Orgasms Are Exciting and Extremely Entertaining! Hope You Finish Her Next 9 Points!

Please make a part 2 continuing Bella's humiliation! This turned me on so much. Wishing I was Bella right now...

I want to be the next contestant.

Goddamn, best story I've read yet. Please keep going

I loved it. made me wet. please more

Omg this is amazing. You seriously hit my all time favorite. Forced humiliation and ridiculous quantities of cum. Girls submerged in it. I am in heaven. Pleaseeee don't stop. More cum more bondage more humiliation. Please. Sametreatment with piss maybe or pony girl play.

Love it so much and neeeed more!

Can't wait for the next chapter, this made me so wet.

Have to find Part 2.

Dude you really need to write part 2. This was awesome. I have bever read anything as hot as this.

Omg please add part 2!!

I keep checking to see if you have added another chapter. Please wright more. You have a great talent. Maybe in future games she has to see how far she can stretch her pussy or ass?

Please add another chapter. This the hottest thing I've ever read! You have unbelievable talent! Man I

More! More Craziness Please!!!!

This story needs to go on!!

And neither should Bella! Another chapter - at least - please!!!

Can't wait

I was on board until the bull cum bits. There were totally other things you could have thought of but that shit's messed and crazy unsafe. Your game construction is amazing, your choice of materials needs work. You can be sexy and depraved without being flat out disgusting.

Whoever said that the bull cum part was disgusting was missing the point-- To me, that's exactly what makes it hot. Humiliation is a wonderful thing!

This was really good. Will there be a chapter 2?

Great Story

Please write more

please make part 2

God, I'm still dying for more of this one years later

This is one of the best stories here! Please make second part!

What the hell!? Where's the rest of the gameshow? This is just a teaser.

Can someone make more? Obviously this guy is gone

Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why, when I find such a cool and interesting story, it turns out to be incomplete? And it will never be completed. To what bloody gods should I sacrifice for the second part to appear?

Loved it. PLEASE complete it. L,B.

OMG this is amazing!!!m PLEASE MORE!!

I think the author died... This was an amazing story, but no part two after many years? R.I.P