All Comments on 'Ben and Katie's Story Ch. 02'

by Jerrycurious

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reader230 about 14 years ago

Wow

I love where this story is going and can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!

Anonymousabout 14 years ago

No Pain

I guess neither felt anything when he broke through the gate ?

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

needs an editor

this needs a rewrite you jump all over the place way to hard to follow get a good editor and rewrite the series now

DBRS

Anonymousover 9 years ago

not really that good

more like nonconsent than loving sex between siblings. NO means NO and the people that say all girls say NO but don't mean it are probably either in jail for rape or should be. IF he really cared about her he would have stop when asked to there was no love here.