by silkstockingslover
This was nice, love the graphic on the sexing. Had my pussy wet the hole time
I loved the story and would love to hear what they do next.
Catholic Priests can't have children. If they did do so, it would be a hush-hush kind of thing. He wouldn't be an overprotective father (alternatively, he wouldn't still be a catholic priest).
Didn't seem like the author said her father *was* a Catholic priest... but rather more like "might as well have been one"...
But that aside... it was an awesome story... three cheers and a tiger for you...
@Anonymous: Describing her father as a catholic priest is of course(!) a figure of speach, as said priests are not supposed to have daughters (or sons). @silkstockingslover: Nice story, but somehow I got the feeling that you got bored with it halfways. Keep writing, you have a good flow and very good dialogue, but keep the suspense up.
Cheers, Anton H
was the exact phrase, and of course was used in a jesting way, meaning a very pious fellow. It did not mean that her father was literally a Catholic priest. At least, I would have made mention of the anomaly when I copy edited the story, if SSL had actually written the character's father as a Catholic priest, even at the risk of exceeding my remit.
In fact, reviewing my file, I proposed as the edit "my wouldbe Catholic priest of a father", which the author rejected in part, as is her good right.
OMG....that was an amazing story. I have recently become bicurious.....and this story set me over the edge!!!
This story was absolutely amazing. I am so glad I was alone in my room when I read this. I got so turned on.
I have to say I have been a literotica fan for years now, and this is the first story I have wanted to leave a comment on!!! So sexy! Great writing!
you are a favorite writter ... no, you are my favorie wRitter
i dont think you should leave zoey and mia over seas expand their love and shock the father with lucrative exotic acts during mass
My friend better watch out or I might try some of this out on her. Beautiful story keep up the brilliant work
I would also love to read what happens next.
P.S. I love all of your stories!!!!
Love is never sweeter then when it grows from true friendship. Your writing talents are impressive, your naughty imagination is playfully fun and your "attention to details" makes your stories (which I have read several) exciting and hard to stop before finishing.
Thank You for sharing, I hope you will continue to gift us with your stories.
Reading this was like reading about my one lesbian experience! It was with my best friend. I was the quite, shy one while she was the flirtatious, sexually experienced one. I had three boyfriends, only slept with one and a blowjob to another. My parents had me controlled. She brought out this wild side in me. Made me do things I would never do on my own. She was always naked around me, and always wanted to dress me in revealing sexy clothes. I love the Backstreet Boys, she was unable to go to the one concert they gave back home and I spent most of the concert holding my cell phone up for her to listen (this was before unlimited phone plans). Backstreet Boys music was playing in the background the first time we were together. We did not end up together, we are still best friends and she was the love of my life but things didn't work out for many reasons. We have been each others only lesbian experience (probably not for long in my case) and she said I have been the only women she has been attracted to and will always be. I on the other hand recently admitted to her that I am bisexual and I am proud to admit it to myself and others. Although I might find myself attracted to other women there will always be a special place in my heart for and a longing that will never dissipate for her. This story made me remember what we had and that first amazing experience. Thank you!
Your description of Mia sounded exactly like me from the dirty blonde hair and brown eyes to the jock style of clothing.
Beautiful story. I really enjoyed it. It's really nice to have friends like that and able to be lovers to boot. Nice work with feelings. Thanks
I've read this one four or five times now, and keep coming back. Thank you for sharing it with us!
Wow what a beautiful-well told story with much real feelings. Loved it Thanks
I have always imagined Amsterdam as being cold all year long. I was surprised to read about “Nude Day” (which I love the idea of). This story was short and to the point. A little fast but still very enjoyable. Thanks for the read. Will there be a sequel?
40D on a woman less than five feet? I think not. The number has nothing to do with the size of the breasts and refers to the circumference of the chest right under the breasts. The letter refers to the breast/cup size.
A forty inch chest on a four foot eleven woman would make her barrel-chested, even obese, with moderate sized boobs.
A better size would be 34DD, a smaller torso size with bigger breasts.
Loved it! Love when two consenting girls get it on. Love is kind AND HOT!