by rak316
As you can tell from my site name, I also have a thing for women's feet. So I enjoyed the foot worship part of your story. But your grammar is terrible. There were so many badly punctuated and run on sentences. Definitely found that distracting; but, because I'm such a foot freak, I couldn't stop reading. And I gave you 4 stars for the foot love.
And one more thing. When did it become proper to say that one "graduated school"? Why was the word "from" eliminated? One does NOT "graduate school!" One graduates from school!
if you dont like the subject matter then dont bother reading it pr***,
Just wanted to say thank you for the feedback. As for the anon who didn't like it, well no one forced you to click on a story whose title clearly denotes a subject matter that I'm supposing you aren't fond of.
Great Story, look foreword to more! Nothing like a mature women who knows what she wants!