All Comments on 'Best Friend's Sister Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Can't wait for Ch 2.

SisterJezabelSisterJezabelalmost 3 years ago

Good start! Looking forward to the next chapter.

allansbulletallansbulletalmost 3 years ago

Damn funny! The repartee is excellent! Needs a sequel or two! 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Super cute! I can't wait for the next chapter!

greenday0418greenday0418almost 3 years ago

Old memories of being a teenager and a friends sisters. Great so far.

G5902G5902almost 3 years ago

Fantastic story and well written — looking forward to reading more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Was I ever that young, it brought me back to the days when life was simple. Please continue and do nt down grade it. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

"Woe, No, No." Uh, no I think you mean "Whoa" there.

HargaHargaalmost 3 years ago

Great start

Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Charming

hornier_bastardhornier_bastardalmost 3 years ago

I enjoyed that... nice start

57Leonard57Leonardalmost 3 years ago

Wonderful. Well written, witty, and wealist… err, realistic.

tohanrytohanryalmost 3 years ago

Great beginning. Can't wait for chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Where's the next one, I need my fix of the cutesy romance stuff!

vazkor13vazkor13over 2 years ago

Amazing job ! Next chapter please !

meduckiesmeduckiesover 2 years ago

Awesome story, keep on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Saran wrap

Omart57Omart57over 2 years ago

Very, Very Good! Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

excellent!!!

DappeDaveDappeDaveover 2 years agoAuthor

Cutesy? It’s cutesy. Okay. Thanks for helping me the “saran” wrap. But the more I got into writing these stories, I came to realize I was writing for therapy’s sake, just for myself. But I’ll keep going.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 2 years ago

Wanda isn't spectacular. Dave is an asshole. I don't know what she sees in him. But I did get a kick out of mother Anderson's final comment. 5/5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Too chatty.

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Story teller. I’ve worked in a variety of industries but enjoy revisiting old memories. I love the wonderful stories I’ve found here. I enjoy romance and I’m open to other experiences.

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