All Comments on 'Best of Enemies Ch. 01'

by Lady_Fiona

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great! A very good story!

I liked your background and leadin work. Grammar and prose were well done and the whole thing flowed. Imagination was evident and well stated. Thank you for a very good story!

GordJenJeanneGordJenJeanneabout 9 years ago
He still was not hard getting out of the shower?

The story was hot but his biggest problem should have been holding on to his load through the shower.

Jen

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