All Comments on 'Best of Intentions Ch. 03'

Love the story.

A great story, well told.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work

Great story i can't wait for the next chapter. I enjoyed this story alot.

Love the story. The only nitpicky thing that bothered me is the time zone issue. If you hadn't made it so specific I might not have noticed -Baltimore (eastern), Minneapolis (central) = 1hour difference not 2.

Keep the story coming I am really enjoying it.

Looking forward to more!

looking forward to the next chapter, soon I hope

The story is very well written and a completely enjoyable read. One small correction. Minneapolis is in the Central Time Zone, one hour ahead of the Eastern Time Zone including Baltimore.

Please do continue it and soon.

BM,

Great! Waiting on chapter 4. Please hurry.

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Great story, love the detail you put into EVERYTHING. Not only is the sex hot (as it should be!) but you also put such emphasis on making these characters seem so real. I can really identify, which really does make the entire experience that much richer. No real complaints. Occasionally I am a little picky about the sporadic mistakes in punctuation, though obviously these are pretty easy to fix and don't really matter that much anyway. Apart from that, I find nothing else I would fix, this is truly a great series. Thanks a bunch, looking forward to Chapter 4! (So yes, please write another chapter!)

awesome u mother fucker just simply awesome

lj

I want to thank everyone for their comments. I am working on Chap 4. Hope to get out soon. Again thanks

Thank you for this heartfelt story of love an family. You are a very talented writter. I think what sets you apart from most others in this catagory is the amount of dialog in your stories most writters build their stories around their own narration. Also bringing Kates thoughts and talk into the story was a gem of an idea

You cant possibly not finish this story... Kate has a brother or sister? Is Maggie going to the alter pregnant? please contnue this story..

There should be more to the end.

i have enjoyed it completely. you wrote it right but if i was in the john characters shoes. i wouldnt have forgiven phyllis, not so easily anyway. she was the base cause for the split after all. give her some of her own medicine for at least for one day. really let the worry set in, scare the shit out of her. then tell her "i have felt like that everyday since she pulled her stunt". i mean honestly, she stole things that can never be given back. he would never be at kate's birth, when she first walked or when she got her first tooth. lots of other stuff too. she was suppost to be his friend and she betrayed him. it was nice of him but i thought she got off way to light considering. he really didnt have any choice in the matter to be separated from his lover. his only contact for maggie was phyllis and she sure as hell wasnt telling him at the time. hell when phyllis told him she was gone as mad as he got i expected him to leave her a mint condition set of knuckle marks on her door as he left. hell he should take phyllis' new soon to be husband out for drinks, get him drunk and not show back up for about 3 days. (a weekend) tell her "doesnt feel to good to lose the one you love for no reason does it".

all that said. lol. i would like you to finish the series it is rather good. i have liked all of your stories i have read so far. angie was just awesome.

when is the next chapter there is more to the story

I found your stories on 7-30-11 and I have read everything,

Please write at least one more chapter in this story.

Thanks. Freddie.

Our hero instantly forgives Phyllis for making him miss the birth of his first child, her first words, first steps, first day of school etc etc, should have a clergy title next to his name Saint John. Also how in the hell did some of the blame get placed on him?

No way a guy reacts like that. Almost stopped reading after that. Totally cringeworthy reading.

I have just found this series and have read them non-stop this morning. If I could give this episode ten stars, I would. It brought tears to my eyes on several occasions and even a runny nose. And I'm a guy in his late sixties. This series is an absolute gem. Now to read episode #4.

Great storyline and good character development. The question is was Phyllis watching John the whole time waiting to see how he turns out? The whole scenario creates a mystery and alot of questions. I give the story a solid 5 stars.

A great story. I loved the funny bits shining through.

I am jealous of John though. He is way too good to be true. Fancy him being adept enough to push pantyhose off. Poor old me, I have always struggled to get them off in any way. Pushing, pulling rolling them down. Nothing seems to work except "Can you please take these off for me?". Yuk. Its no wonder I prefer my wife to wear stockings. Much sexier. Better access too. But well done John.