All Comments on 'Best of Intentions Ch. 04'

The charachters are wonderful and the story sings! Can't wait to read more. Thank you for writing it.

I look forward to seeing more stories from you as you are one of my favorite authors if not the favorite.

We want more, please don't leave us hanging with the story being unresolved. Hope you can continue this series.

Now you can cure syphilis with an antibiotic. But as for Phyllis, I guess it would be sharpen her head and drive her in the ground, then use the bitch for a fucking fencepost. Good story other than that.

I have enjoyed the series so far and am looking forward to next installment. I do hope it won't be too long.

Loved it. I hope you will continue it in the future though. Definitely needs a ch.05 we can't go on without the Wedding of the Ages!

I don't know what you used to do before you took up writing erotic stories but now we all have a another great writer - like Clancy and Cussler!!

Keep up the great work and stay healthy!!

One of the worst. 1* .

Just like to say I enjoyed your story greatly

This chapter leaves us with a strong feeling that there must be more to come. Please put us all out of our misery and indulge us all.

Wow: Another great story. Thank you ever soooooo much!!! You done a GREAT job. Best wishes.

I have just now found this series (2016). This comment is for the totality of the ‘Best Intentions’ series. Loved the story. My tears came naturally in places - albeit unexpectedly [I am too old to cry over a fictional story.]. The only down side was when I connected the author’s comment, “Hope to have the next installment out before the next millennia.” and the posting date of 08/05/11 with the current year - 2016. Will there be another installment?

Let me tell you, I've been a fan of your stories, and here is another great one! Can't wait to see what you have next!!!

Another ten stars!

Such a great love story and what does the author do, leaves us hanging and since this chapter was published 8/11/2011. I guess we the readers will just have to be disappointed. It never seems to fail that when you find a story with as much passion and love between the two main characters the author quits writing for what ever reason and the readers are left without closure. The author I guess had the "best-of-intentions" but it appears he failed to complete this wonderful story and my only question is why??? Storyline in any event gets a solid 5 stars

A series of quite good stories. They are a little too convenient in circumstance, though. His acceptance of her explanation is a little hard to accept, on my part. Nevertheless, I gave them a 4 Star ⭐ rating.

Everybody is so quick to forgive and forget, such a sweet story but I just feel that Maggie or Phyllis should have communicated with John or his mom before he walked into that office... Still 5*, I am a sucker for a happy ending.