All Comments on 'Best Secretary A Man Ever Had'

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hawkeye0007hawkeye0007almost 13 years ago
good story

I was sorry when it ended.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
The usual.......

EXCELLENT of course......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Something I seldom say....

I wish it had been longer. Great story and just a damned fun read.

Michael

Rob ConnerRob Conneralmost 13 years ago
Loved IT!!!

Good Story, Well Written! Good Tale! I didn't want it to end either!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Little bit long getting going, but a good read

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRideralmost 13 years ago
Nice, very nice.

Truly, this is a delightful (and sometimes amusing) story. Write on!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

What a sweet story. I enjoyed this one

BigJohn601BigJohn601almost 13 years ago
One never knows what will walk in your office door...

A wonderful feel good story that is very well written.

demantoiddemantoidalmost 13 years ago
I really enjoyed this story!

I absolutely fell in love with both characters, but particularly Hank. She was so endearing. Further I loved some of the great lines in the story, for instance: "My job is to make sure I sell enough of the Chinese made crap to make bonus each month". Such a great line...says it all about the other main character... A bit of a Willie Loman. Brilliant sentence, brilliant writing. What was great, this was one of a number of fabulous sentences that propelled this story. Loved it!

curioussscuriousssalmost 13 years ago
You are so darned talented...

...and your plots so diverse.

Excellent story - I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Just like the Secretary!

This the best story I have read on this site. It was enjoyable.

xtremeddxtremeddalmost 13 years ago
Way to go, Hank. Boss n'girl team will win everytime. Go team go.

mm,

Winners always win. A "winning" story if I ever read one.

Thanks for sharing on Lit.

x

RonRWoodRonRWoodalmost 13 years ago
Nice

I love that your characters are just ordinary people with ordinary jobs if they work at all!

GualterioGualterioalmost 13 years ago
Agree with RonRWood

Yes, the ordinary true to life nature of many of MM's characters is indeed very special. For anyone reading this, there is another author, PepperPace, who has many stories with unusual heroes and heroines and is also very very good.

oldwayneoldwayneabout 12 years ago
Hawkeye liked it and he's not often wrong!

Actually, it was definitely a Five Star story. I also hated to see it end. Thanks for another fine story!

ichews2ichews2over 11 years ago

Great yarn. She was the star of the show, and what she saw in that limp dick, I really don't know. She saved his ass and gave him hers as well. Five stars to Hank. And to you as well, magmaman.

zl00pedragl0verzl00pedragl0verabout 11 years ago
FANTASTIC STORY

My Missus takes care of me like that . I try

do my damnedest to reciprocate but it is

not easy when she is in a different tax

bracket to myself. I am blessed , I am very

grateful for her. Thank you for this story

ZL00py

gulshannraygulshannrayabout 11 years ago
Best Secretary

One of the very best stories narrated very compassionately. I find most of the other stories categorised Mature also are equally great. I congratulate and thank Magmaman at the same time.

Keep it up.

BANJARBANJARabout 11 years ago
Nicley done.

I have dated a large woman for many years. When I let her run the show, she is more efficient than I would ever hope to me. Good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
story rolled along at a good pace

loved the way they came together and worked together.....and a happy ending......

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
best secertary i ever had

great story Hank wanted him and went after him and got him.you guys have to remember making love to a skinny girl is like driving over railroad tracs you get to the same place but it can be a bumpy ride. now you make love to a BBW and the sofeness along with the love is there and usually appreciated more i know for a fact my wife is a(BBW). not the first time to read this story or the last yes it is in my favorites. 5 stars plus

now how about a follow up story on the two lovebirds. good content in the story and funny loving all that good stuff.

Ron

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
WTF

In correct English, the word"visited", or the word, "visits" is not a substitute (synonym) for "talked" or "talks".

retmstrretmstralmost 9 years ago
****

Little girl, big hole. Big girl, little hole. A trucker told me that 60 years ago. I've found it to be just the opposite. Almost had a secretary one time. She said no at the last minute. Bummer. Fun story, hot rocks. Enjoyed it. Cheers!

jackh1962jackh1962over 8 years ago
visited/visit

It may not be correct use of these words according to the English department at college, however depending on where you live it is common to use these words in this manner. people will talk and write as they are accustomed to doing. So get over it, the English police are not needed or wanted here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
cute...

Very "cute" story and only wished that it was a couple of pages longer !

More.!!! Look forward to more like this in the future and I will give you another '5' if it is as good as this one was.

Thx.

J

Brit4LitBrit4Litalmost 7 years ago
A great read

The story flows nicely and I like that you made her a bigger gal. Well done.

jimjam69jimjam69over 3 years ago

Great story because Hank is not your usual run of the mill hot chick. She is a smart attractive large female with a multitude of talents to last for the long run.

Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

A great story, love it.

AAAAA+++++

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great tale and great comments. Always enjoy your tales. LP

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

What a great little story. Had me grinning all the way to the end. Thanks

SequoiaSempervirensSequoiaSempervirens3 months ago

I searched for this story again because it is such an enjoyable read. Great romance! Next time I’ll stay anonymous so that I can give it another five stars.

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