by magmaman
I wish it had been longer. Great story and just a damned fun read.
Michael
Good Story, Well Written! Good Tale! I didn't want it to end either!
Truly, this is a delightful (and sometimes amusing) story. Write on!
A wonderful feel good story that is very well written.
I absolutely fell in love with both characters, but particularly Hank. She was so endearing. Further I loved some of the great lines in the story, for instance: "My job is to make sure I sell enough of the Chinese made crap to make bonus each month". Such a great line...says it all about the other main character... A bit of a Willie Loman. Brilliant sentence, brilliant writing. What was great, this was one of a number of fabulous sentences that propelled this story. Loved it!
...and your plots so diverse.
Excellent story - I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Thanks
This the best story I have read on this site. It was enjoyable.
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Winners always win. A "winning" story if I ever read one.
Thanks for sharing on Lit.
x
I love that your characters are just ordinary people with ordinary jobs if they work at all!
Yes, the ordinary true to life nature of many of MM's characters is indeed very special. For anyone reading this, there is another author, PepperPace, who has many stories with unusual heroes and heroines and is also very very good.
Actually, it was definitely a Five Star story. I also hated to see it end. Thanks for another fine story!
Great yarn. She was the star of the show, and what she saw in that limp dick, I really don't know. She saved his ass and gave him hers as well. Five stars to Hank. And to you as well, magmaman.
My Missus takes care of me like that . I try
do my damnedest to reciprocate but it is
not easy when she is in a different tax
bracket to myself. I am blessed , I am very
grateful for her. Thank you for this story
ZL00py
One of the very best stories narrated very compassionately. I find most of the other stories categorised Mature also are equally great. I congratulate and thank Magmaman at the same time.
Keep it up.
I have dated a large woman for many years. When I let her run the show, she is more efficient than I would ever hope to me. Good writing.
loved the way they came together and worked together.....and a happy ending......
great story Hank wanted him and went after him and got him.you guys have to remember making love to a skinny girl is like driving over railroad tracs you get to the same place but it can be a bumpy ride. now you make love to a BBW and the sofeness along with the love is there and usually appreciated more i know for a fact my wife is a(BBW). not the first time to read this story or the last yes it is in my favorites. 5 stars plus
now how about a follow up story on the two lovebirds. good content in the story and funny loving all that good stuff.
Ron
In correct English, the word"visited", or the word, "visits" is not a substitute (synonym) for "talked" or "talks".
Little girl, big hole. Big girl, little hole. A trucker told me that 60 years ago. I've found it to be just the opposite. Almost had a secretary one time. She said no at the last minute. Bummer. Fun story, hot rocks. Enjoyed it. Cheers!
It may not be correct use of these words according to the English department at college, however depending on where you live it is common to use these words in this manner. people will talk and write as they are accustomed to doing. So get over it, the English police are not needed or wanted here.
Very "cute" story and only wished that it was a couple of pages longer !
More.!!! Look forward to more like this in the future and I will give you another '5' if it is as good as this one was.
Thx.
J
The story flows nicely and I like that you made her a bigger gal. Well done.
Great story because Hank is not your usual run of the mill hot chick. She is a smart attractive large female with a multitude of talents to last for the long run.
What a great little story. Had me grinning all the way to the end. Thanks
I searched for this story again because it is such an enjoyable read. Great romance! Next time I’ll stay anonymous so that I can give it another five stars.