All Comments on 'Beth and Allyson's Date'

This is well written story. MY rating of 4 stars.

Hope we don't have to wait long for the next installment.

This story made me so wet, can't wair for more!

What a well told story. I am old and IIT got my full attention well done with great discription. Made this old man very warm. Really not warm but hot and I am 83 and still love to eat pussy. Thanks

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I've said it before, Beautiful.

This has the potential to become a beautiful love story. The dialog is great, the romance is sublime, and the sex is explosive. What more could a girl ask for but more please!

I started reading this chapter and by the first paragraph I went to read all your stories in order.obviously finishing here.

I really loved your characters, especially the hot sexy teenage Jenna. The stories flowed well and the detail was, well, detailed. And very hot. made me wet through out with many pause moments for relief!

I very much look forward to more of your writing and finding out what transpires between these four sexy girls.

Thank you.

Please continue. This was very well written. Will definitely go back and read your other stories.

To me it would be nice to find out that Jenna and her mother were involved. Make for some good scenes.

I have read the entire series and they are all great, keep the coming.

This is one of the best series I have read in a while. Please don't make us wait long for the next chapter.

But at some point you pretty much have to have Jenna and her mom get together.

This series has proven to be a wonderful experience. I hope you'll write more of it soon.

Enjoyed your writing of this story. Hoping for a new episode soon.

If you are undecided about direction of this story, then think of what is most likely to play out. Don't go with the ultimate fantasy too quickly.

Oh how I came. Can we meet sometime?

Like you to give me a very thorough and intrusive physical...tasting...and fucking.

Vice-versa too.

Simply brilliant

Loved it & looking for more

First rate. More to follow I hope.

Nice story, shame about the less than good English grammar and orthography. imminently should be eminently. I am surprised that an obviously educated author you make so many silly mistakes. kind of breaks the rhythm of the story. Still as expected from a non-english education. sarcasm intended.