All Comments on 'Betrayal and Obsession'

More more more. Looking forward to more of this story. Jason is a right bastard but I so want to know if he's gonna be able to pull that whole thing off. Betraying his friend like that is cold. Good work, I hope it's not too long until the next one.

omg i havent been this excited for the next chapter of a story in soooo long

about this story! Great start! I'm hooked already!

to this saga

to this saga

Good story idea.

name etc just they came to conclusion in one chapter and the girl ends with jason confused wounder who copied who?

I like the idea of Jason and Michael bartering for this girl, as if either one should have a say in the matter. And I especially like the idea of Jason getting revenge on Adrienne for being snarky to him. Nice chapter!

what? Jason was hitting on his friend's girlfriend, that's not snarky, it's loyalty to her boyfriend.

"Come on Mike, there has to be another way we can work this out." He sounded desperate. " I think you meant Jason not Michael (confused me for a sec). And dude mob thugs don't take checks...just saying.

Thanks for sharing and now I'm on to the next chapter