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by Phineas

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WatercrazyWatercrazyabout 16 years ago
great plot

but unfinished on more than one line. I hope u'll post the next chapter soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Please continue :'(

Definitely unfinished! Hope to see Betrayal's hands part two or more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
HOOKED UP!!!

DUDE, THIS STORY HAS GOT ME SO HOOKED UP!!! JUS CAN'T WAIT TILL YA RELEASE THE SEQUEL... WAITIN AND WANTIN MORE...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
loved this

You a great story here. I can't what for the next prat of a many chaPTER novel.

Rovky88Rovky88about 11 years ago

What Next. Don't leave us hanging.

Crusader235Crusader235over 2 years ago

Great start, keep it going. Five stars.

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I've been away for about a year and a half, but I've been very busy writing on my Patreon site (https://www.patreon.com/booksbyjason). I came back to shamelessly self-promote and toss a few more stories on here to try and win some people over. Currently I'm posting some more ...