All Comments on 'Betrayed Ch. 02 (Complete Revision)'

I loved the revision! Is there another chapter in the mking? I hope so!!!

I didn't have a chance to read the original submission but nonetheless, I thought this was wonderful. I'm glad that her Masters figured out that she liked the pain she was getting and used it to their advantage. I'm anxious to see what punishment they have planned!

Not a decent character in the lot. Horrible people. I'd give you a zero if I could because one star is too many.