All Comments on 'Betrayed Ch. 06'

Loved the end of the story. I'm a sucker for a happy ending! I hope you'll have something else coming out soon - I'll miss waiting for the installments of this one.

What a surprise! Not at all what I expected from the previous chapters. I don't know whether to be delighted or disappointed. I do wonder where you'll go from here. Anyway, well done.

I this wuz great this twist from all the other chapters please make more i love these!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tell me you're going to keep going and it's not going to end here!

Boringgggggg!!!!!!!!! get a life. I hate wasting my time.

If you thought it was boring why bother to read all 6 chapters? Seriously if you dont like it does it not make sense to stop reading it- especially if there is more than one submission for a storyline. Moving on, MistressMerry i must say that this was a wonderful and engaging piece of work. Perhaps a bonus epilogue style chapter could possibly be in the works? Thanks again for the story! jacinta xxO

If they are still calling them Master how are they free?