All Comments on 'Bets Maid'

When i read this i felt there was a perfect balance between romance and and raw sex, i just loved how Lucille was portrayed, she was so subtle but when she wanted to take her lover she was so raunchy and but still romantic, definitely a tale I would share with understandable parties

Dear Lord,,,,please send my an angel of Lucille’s qualities so I may enjoy her heavenly delights!!!!! Amen!!!!

what a lovely self-contained story

Very entertaining. Please continue

Great submission from one Master to her Slave, now new Mistress hahaha she is going to make him her sissy bitch. Waiting for chapter 2

You're an inspiration.

Hard to type, because little oxygen left in my brain.

Really enjoyed this story, read through your other submissions, still come back to this one as my fav.

My favourite author never fails to make my ass tingle, wonderfully written and so deliciously erotic

More please more..........

I usually prefer the more dominant shemale story but this one was told so beautifully that I enjoyed every word. Loved the only room in the house that was messy; the one sock; the misunderstanding about the carpet. I like the little things like that and I particularly like that you left the rest of the story, including him doing the fucking, to the imagination of the reader.

What a beautifully told story... love it... wish I could find a girl like her

Please make a sequel of this story. Please?

I enjoyed the story. My only wish is that it was longer, allowing the sexual tension to build between the two. As it stands, it was still good, but felt sort of rushed.

I'm jealous of him. Any chance of a second chapter?

There's actually a really nice, beautiful romance angle in this one. Not sure how many others noticed, esp. in a story with references to bondage, slavery, and dominance, but there's a natural buildup for something like actual love, as opposed to diseased obsession here. Xtina, this is a good one.

Beautiful story ...

The start was somewhat mild with Luke winning a house,and a shy emotional maid slave who seemed quiet and meek,who seemed eager to please Master Luke,but as the story progressed Lucille started to have feelings for him,more than the master & slave aspect.Finally Luke told her he was going to gamble again,thinking he was gonna give Lucille up he didn't end up betting her.

So Luke kept her and the house,but then the twist came and Luke allowed Lucille to go first but she changed her whole persona and became a Futa Dominatrix that was anxious to treat her master as the submissive,and so fucked the shit out of him and dominate him a little.But all-n-all to have the roles reversed was a very nice touch.

Borderline abusive at the end with the bondage an rough sex. Hes an anal virgin aftrret all. The hate fuck she gave him was unecesariily rough and cruel. She likely tote him up. hes brobably intetnally damaged and possibly bleading. He needs a little aftercare not more sex. i know its just a story but her instance swicth into a heartless bitch quasi raping him was a turnoff