All Comments on 'Better Than New Ch. 01'

I will be looking forward to the additional chapters. Thank for your fine contributions.

and this one started out fine; by the time we finished with chapter one, we get a sense that we know most of the major characters well enough to understand their goods and bads, and what they're doing and where they want to go, etc. <p>

sex, whether "good" or "bad", should be a natural occurance to the natural flow of a flow, not the central thing in it.

I agree with another poster, that the best stories start with character development and let things develop from there. Clearly you have dropped hints about "Trip" Beeson and I can guess that it involves his ex wife and the reason they are divorced. Keep on developing these four major characters and the story should be a good read.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

This one is about people and as always Coaster 2 is building it up smoothly. I have to admit that only the principle character has shown some of his week points, though Doreen's initial moodiness suggested problems.

Why do I think that Val's wife had/has an affair with Trip?

This seems familiar, but I can't really remember it.

Seems good so far!

Don't know and don't care, but I'm going too! Really likable characters. Not much plot thus far but I favor longer stories anyway. Thanks for writing. JPR

A bit slow but enjoyable. Too many details not really important for the story. Other than that it looks good so far.

quite interesting so far. guess Val's ex cheated with Beeson?

I liked the way this story flowed and am excited to read more.