All Comments on 'Between a Mother and Son'

Great story very horny!

Such a sweet, loving story between a son and his mother. What a perfect love story that ends in a wonderful fuck session. Loved every word.

I liked the story, especially the sex. Hopefully the next chapter won't need as much of the backstory and will have more sex.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Alveoli

1. any of the many tiny air sacs of the lungs which allow for rapid gaseous exchange.

•an acinus (sac-like cavity) in a gland.

2. the bony socket for the root of a tooth.

I think you meant:

Areola - a small circular area, in particular the ring of pigmented skin surrounding a nipple.

Very Good Story, Though!

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love.

I really enjoyed the story. I could feel the love they have for each other. I hope you can get the rest of her pain out of her as she goes thru the struggle of leaving the husband behind. I'm thinking she finally gains her strength from your love for her as she moves on with her life to. Become not only your lover but also the strong woman she seems to be as well.

Be waiting for more

Very yummy and very good! Thank you!

Nice slow buildup to a great release! Anxious for more

Very nice. A nice methodical build up. Please continue.

Loved it! Please give us more.

Well written with an erotic build-up to a very satisfying conclusion. Hope to see and read more of you work.

The perfect blend of love and lust,of hearts and bodies.More please....

Part 2 ASAP plz...

Oh part two asap, PLEASE. Love to hear her fucking him again and again...

In two pages you packed so much love, sensuality, dirty talk--I LOVED the dirty talk when they were in bed--and the reason for this mother and son to be in love. Plus your writing style is superb. Bravo!

Awesome cant wait till we get the second part. and please kill daddy or get him sober and let him find an aa lover or something.

I can't wait for the continuation!! The way this story was told had all the love and affection that this type of relationship needs to last. I sat here at the end and had to take a deep breath, I was holding my breath for sooooo long.

No very erotic?? It was truly an incredibly beautiful and very erotic love story!

Loved his chest hair and her fingers playing with it.

I enjoyed your story but my concentration kept getting sidetracked by your writing style. Let me explain:

1. Sentences begin with a Capital Letter (i.e. A, B, C);

2. When quoting someone's exact words use Quotation Marks (i.e. " ");

3. The first word in sentences within Quotation Marks are always capitalized (with

very few exceptions);

4. There is NO SPACE between the Quotation Marks and the dialogue;

5. Just like in normal prose writing, the sentence in Quotation Marks ends with

punctuation (i.e. a period ., question mark ? or exclamation mark !);

6. Use the Ellipsis (...) sparingly for greater effect; and,

7. ALWAYS USE "SPELL CHECK" AND "GRAMMAR CHECK" before submitting any

document!

All that being said, your story (and you) have great potential. I would recommend getting an editor from Literotica to go over your stories before you publish.

Good luck!

This story could be the story of my mother and me. My mother was the love of my life. A mothers love is so great and beautiful.

As rightly pointed out, centuries-old barriers have been raise between Mother and Son, the Original Lovers. Artificial ethical and religious barriers prevent the coming together of two Greatest Lovers on Earth.

A Mother and Son are drawn to each other naturally. In fact, psychologically, it is called Oedipus Complex. A Son not only is drawn to his Mother first, but he also looks for his Mother in his Lady Love. Thus, the Abiding Original Lovers are the Mother, Son. Man, Woman Love is only a Mirror Reflection of Mother, Son Love.

It is this natural flair and romance between Mother and Son that comes out so sharply in Between A Mother And Son. The entry of son's dick into his mother's pussy, as both of them look straight into each other's eyes is the greatest finale. I feel, this is the Greatest Love Story Ever Told! rchand969@gmail.com

Slow build up but set the scene. The next can precede on to there life, telling the girls and moving Father out.

REgards

But I agree with Funewriter1 on all but two things.

1. Using spell checker.

If you depend on spell checker you'll end up with some wrong words so that your story won't make any sense. All spell checker does is make sure a word is spelled correctly and it does not know if it is the correct word for that sentence.

2. Using grammar checker.

If spell checker has inserted the wrong word, then you can grammar check it till dooms day and nothing will make sense.

Find an Editor....... There are plenty of them on Lit, and they edit for free.

People who write good stories should have no problem finding an Editor.

Poeg peab emaga väga õrnalt ringi käima seksi ajal.

I wish I had a son to fuck me so hard and gentle at the same time.I am so wet.

Mina pidasin emaga koduaias pikniku ja võtsime veini.Hakkas juba pimenema kui emal hakkas pissi häda ja läks aiamaja taha.Mina läksin temaga kaasa ning ema pissis minu ees ja ise naeris.Läksin ta juurde ja tõstsin ta püsti ja suudlesin.Pikali ei saanud teda panna kuivanud maapinna tõttu,siis tegin emale püstiasendis ära.Ema oigas hirmsasti nii et mul hakkas hirm.

Good built story, but where is the continuation?

You tell a complete story. Looking forward to Pt 02 and Pt 03 Thanks for sharing.

Nice job telling a believable and hot story.

But it's CUM author not come idiot!

A beautifully told story. No criticism here. 5*. -d

Very good indeed!

Son takes his rightful place, after Dad bottoms out, in his mother's heart and bed!

Great Start!

Since you said this is a true story, I will believe it. You are lucky that you got to know your mother as a mother and person.

Wow.

When I was a young boy, barely in my teens, I guess I was a gifted artist for my age. My beautiful mom found a fairly large stack of drawings I had made of her. It would be obvious to anyone that I focused (read: I was obcessed with her titties and nipples. In fact, when she sat me down for our "talk", one of her first questions centered on my accuracy. She figured that the only way I could have drawn them so accurately was for me to have actually seen them. Our talks continued, and I could tell that she considered my drawings to be the highest form of compliment. And she even took off her blouses and bras several times to encourage me to draw more. She even asked me to detail poses she would enjoy doing for her. She began to wear shorts and tops without bras. She smiled a lot more and appeared to be happier. This story meant a lot to me. Thank you.

The timing was great build up perfect. I totally Love it. Thank You!

Great story. Guaranteed to have any man working a boner all along. Having mom for my lover the greatest gift of my life.

My word……beautifully written. A perfect story between the most erotic of couplings.

I had the time of my life reading this.. and also.. discovered a whole new perspective.. excellent story.. perfect in every way!

u d better quit ep1, next eps junk

I am very certain that somebody could ask you for the time of day, and you would build them a watch. You "talk" too much - - your introduction was three times longer than what it needed to be. Sooooooo much bullshit!!!

What a beautiful, tender story this is! I'm in awe every time i read it. And while not steamy, my opinion is this story qualifies as erotic.

Just wonderful. Romantic and loving. I just loved the way she loved up her son. Well done.

The mother’s age was not given. She could be a young mother and in need of a strong and caring male in her life. She may feel safe with her son because he is familiar to her and not just some guy who will treat her the same as her husband. Incest can change both people but could be a way to find comfort with someone known to each other.

Piece of crap! She, her, she, her, she. That's mostly what I kept reading. Incest erotica is all about continually highlighting the relationship using phrases like 'my mother' or 'my son' instead of this generic bland she, her crap.

What a wonderful story!

It was a true and tender love story, and I loved every minute of it. The pacing and development of the story and characters was perfect.

And I am eager to read the next part of this story. Hopefully, it will showcase the father being permanently relegated to life in the basement, while the son continues to build a strong and very meaningful and satisfying loving relationship with his mother.

I thank you very much for writing an excellent composition!

And to Slickers, the impossible complainer, I offer an incest story worthy of your steel and attention span:

AFTER PICKING HER SCABS TO MAKE HER GOOD AND WET, I FUCKED MY MOTHERS CUNT. The end.

Sincerely,

B4PW.