All Comments on 'Between Floors'

I loved it. Simple and just enough information for understanding the plot. And most of all an hot story.

Especially the ending.

so good that I wouldn't mind seeing a part II to this one! Loved the characters and the story behone them!

Well written, intelligent and sexy.

Wow... Seriously? WHAT?.. YOU ARE SOOO ON!

YOu understand timing to the T..haha.. Thank you for that, seriously.. I'm at work, turned on and wishing I would get stuck in the elevator with Jake!

Jesus you are AMAZING... YOu are DEFINITELY going on my fav's list! muah!

to borrow Kayla's line...FUCK! that was TOTALLY HOT!!! LOVED IT!

How about another story with these 2 in it?

Absolutely loved every word of it.

Hot story, that was great. I love these kinds of stories sets up a hot sparking tension that just explodes :D

*pause in comment to wipe coke off of computer screen....

GREAT STORY! man... where is that building again? lol

Hot Hot Hot.

Loved it.

Damn, what a story! Thanks for sharing!

Hot, hot, hot!

The character banter, the personalities and the environment portrayed in the text was enjoyable to read, allowed me to paint a picture in my mind and have fun with it.

Cool stuff, keep it coming!!

That was fucking amazing!!

So vividly sexual!