All Comments on 'Beverly Took Pity On Me'

the story was very good, but the English so poor (esp. in the beginning) that the overall is barely average. Too bad you don't have an editor.

I enjoyed the storey. Most of the time author's don't use dialogue. They just tell the storey. I like the way there is verbal interaction between the characters. The fact that the dialogue is soooo sexy and hot just adds to my enjoyment.

I'm 67. Where can I find a Beverly? Can we get her to move to N.H.?

"storey" = "story"

"author's" = "authors"

Illiterate twat

Good story! Piss on the grammar nazis!

l read Drew's story this afternoon and got excited. l am 69 and can get it up sometimes when l read stories like this. l have a neighbour Jan who is 60 and does odd jobs around the street. We have always made suggestive remarks to each other and laughed together. This evening l was randy when Jan called and asked if there was anything l needed. l casually said a couple of hours in bed with you would be fine. She said Why not now and we went to my big double bed and we had a good few hours. l was able to keep it up in her for about an hour and she was well satisfied.

We are going to have a regular session as we are both single widowed people.

lf you want more then reply in this column. Ken

Another very good fun read. Thanks for writing it.

Warren

You need to write more stories about these two. Very erotic.