All Comments on 'Beyonce in Bondage Ch. 04'

by TheDarkCloud

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
J-Lo as a slave!!!!

What a great thought. Oh boy I can't wait until she had Beyonce as her slave for the day I hope she tans bey's butt all night long. if I were you I's introduce Janet Jackson, Ciara and Ashanti to the story, they're hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
OK

The story plot was very good, but I wish you had written it better. Work on that in your next chapter, and it will be much better.

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