All Comments on 'Big Apple Siblings'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 11 years ago
I think that there's a lot more story yet to be told.

I can see where Matt becomes totally in love with his sister Jenna, and the sexual love affair they share takes him over so much he wants to give Jenna a lot more than he can give her on the pay he is now making and he gets off of his lazy ass and gets a job that will give him the money so he can give Jenna the things she deserves.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
WHY NOT...

Love your sister; in all the ways. There is definitely potential for a long series of time together(and apart... dating others? Yes a nice start. Thank you.

sabra16023sabra16023almost 11 years ago
Please Continue!!

You have started a great story, now you need to continue it in more chapters. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
WTF?

"Jenna shuttered with exhilaration"

Is she a storm window? I believe the word you're looking for is "shuddered".

Corco763Corco763over 10 years ago
Einfach gut!

Mehr gibt es nicht zu sagen.

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