All Comments on 'Big Brother Comes to Visit'

but it's much longer than it had to be to accomplish the same ending.

Loved it, please keep on writing.

Thank God for brothers and promotions. Both mean a lot.

Great story, I loved reading from her point of view. Maybe he could narrate next time, I'd love to hear what big bro though of his sis!

A very erotic story with well written sex scenes that were very visual to the reader.

Thanks for the good read.

But didn't she have a boyfriend in the beginning? Did she ever dump him or is this part of a series?

The subject is not exactly central to the story, but here is the quote addressing it from near the end of the story:

"Oh yeah, that's right, what am I going to do about him? Have to see how the week plays out I guess, but somehow I don't see him in my future."

Sheba

Thanks, yea I knew it wasn't the main focus and I felt foolish asking but it just nagged at me. LOL.

rotten!!! this sister deserves many cum in the throat, stops, she-cat and why not in the ass… I you contact into private

I really enjoyed the story. Well written sex from a woman's point of view is most erotic. Keep up the good work. I'll be watching for it!

This is the hottest incest story on literotica. I love how vivid your descriptions are, and how you really capture the passion of the scenes in your words.

You do have a way with words. That was so hot!

The initial mutual attraction was a bit precipitate, but once they were at it the writing was terrific. Hot, steamy, lustful sex, really well written.

More please Sheba!

I am a voracious reader and this is one of the best stories I have ever read. I am tough old bird, retired NAVY and an ex mercenary and this story has moved me very deeply To use the NAVY's highest form of praise - BRAVO ZULU, the signal flag way of saying - WELL DONE! Please don't stop practicing your craft. The scenes of making love are so expressive that I can't help but think that they are a description of personal experience

I read literotica often and I must say, this is one of the best stories on here.. thank you and please continue to write I love it!

Like several comments have said-very believable and extremely erotic. When reading you feel like you are Jenny and you FEEL what she feels. Not much imagination is needed. Well written and hope there is more to come;

thank you for a wonderful read!!

Exceptional!

There is only one word to describe this story. HOT!!!

This story is well constructed. I found it nostalgic and erotic to say the least.

More please!

Wet hot wet. fuck Wow.

It was so fucking hot!! I wish I was her. We need to know what happens next!!

Good work! Truthfully wonderful story

This was fun to read. Well constructed. Good descriptions. Pleasant love scenes.

Wow. Just wow.

But it would have been much better with more story and less of just another fuck story. Also better if he ask her to come back to where he lived as his wife, a place where no one knew them.

I loved the story! I apologize I ment to give it 5 stars and missed just an hit 4