All Comments on 'Big Butt Chronicles: Yvette'

by mondotoken

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Really good

I liked the way you sneaked up on the characters being mixed-race So many of these stories emphasize so-and-so being lily white or black as the ace of spades.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
You are, without a doubt...

functionally illiterate.

Can't spell worth shit.

You use "big" words but spell them phonetically.

Jesus wept.

Why can't we give -1 stars?

mondotokenmondotokenover 8 years agoAuthor
Comments from a sad bitch...

Re: You are, without a doubt...

functionally illiterate.

Can't spell worth shit.

You use "big" words but spell them phonetically.

Jesus wept.

Why can't we give -1 stars?

Response:

Stalking me again (snore.)-biatch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Once again I am impressed

You never fail to bring the heat mondotoken

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Cool

Personally I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
King

Your best work yet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
not finish cupid effect?

this work is very good but won't u finish the cupid effect? it would be so nice if you ended it. ty

red9assassinred9assassinabout 8 years ago

Mondotoken, this is why I love your shit, my nigga!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice one

What a way to lose your V-card

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Incomplete

Are you ever going to complete this story ??

mondotokenmondotokenover 4 years agoAuthor
Incomplete Are you ever going to complete this story ??

Big Butt Chronicles Ch. 02: Latisha

It was placed out of order by the site: "You're Welcome"

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