All Comments on 'Big City Cock Ch. 01'

A good story other than the name muddle stride

Got me hard. Nice start. I think James may turn out to be a lucky gurl! I’m jealous!

Not a bad story. Needs some edits terribly. It's it Carl or Brad? And who TF is James? LOL

Brice telling his side of how the relationship started with James' roommate was hot. But, unless he turns out to be a shapeshifter, the thing that takes away from this story is the name changes of Carl/Brad who even became Brice at one point. A good story that could be a great story with a little editing.

Wow that was a hot story. I kinda identify with Brice a bit, although I prefer older daddies to fuck me. 10 stars…. 🤤

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Alot of name mix ups toward the end but still great start!

Hope you continue with the story. Love to see James being turned into Carl sissy bitch

Is it Carl or Brad or who the hell is it LOL. Maybe read through your work first before you post.

Nice story.

Your username is so perfect !!

So sorry for the name mix ups, sirs! :( This dumb slut will try harder for part 2 as there's no way to edit once published (that I know of). Glad to see it made some of you hard. :)

You'd have fewer problems with names if you wright it in first person rather than second person.

This story is hot. Made me horny as hell.

Can't wait to read more.

I had a lot of spelling errors on my first story, I found it easier to write on notepad and upload it so I could proof read it easier. Great story look forward to reading more

Didn’t care about the name mixups..the story got me very hard…looking forward to more from you..

JT

Glad u told us to us

I thought it was my vision