by sethp
wow that was an awesome story!!!! it was really hot!!! awesome job
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Nice one shot Seth! First of all, I award you 50 bonus points for using the word "copse."
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A very fun and sexy short read!
I loved the snappy pace, and the sweetness throughout the story.
good story Seth. I liked it. Sweet story, would be interested to see where else you went with this.
It was a little quick for my taste, but i loved the story Uncle Sethy. ;o) Thank You!!
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Nice story. I'm a fan of one-pagers. One phrase jerked me out of the flow: "...wave after wave of orgasm washed over her like the waves of an ocean." Too many waves. I'd delete from "like" to the end of the sentence. I know, picky, picky, picky.