by Ashson
A bit of tongue in cheek humour always helps towards the end objective, well done.
I couldn't tell you and I don't know who came 2nd . The verbal / physical thrusts, parries, deflections, feints and score were all too dazzling.
Full marks * * * * *
All females should be forced to read your stories because they are all the same. The arrogant asshole guy and the dumbass girl who gets tricked or conned into getting fucked by the asshole guy. That way all females will know why women always say that men are pigs because they were once like a character from any of your repetitive stories. Wash rinse repeat.
I'm going to be honest, o wish this was a tad bit longer, not a fan of cliffhangers