All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 06'

Dont need or want more dudes in this story. Only ruins whats already set up.

You clearly haven't read any of Steve Wallace's other stories.

Enjoying this story so far and looking forward to reading more.

Wondering where the girls learned their ideals from, was it their parents? Are they in an open marriage and what will they make of the life that their daughters have with Mark?

What I am reading sounds familiar. I like it!

JR

Thank you for sharing this fun story

The polyamory dialogue gave me a flashback to one of Ayn Rand's rambling monologues, on the psychological underpinnings of capitalism

Intellectually, I get the idea your fictional female lays out - love flows, and all that jazz - but my lizard-brained, male instinct refuses to go with that flow

it sees any other guy as at least a mild threat, and vehemently pushes away any other woman's advances, as a threat to the trust I work to earn from my partner

It's not often I find a story that can entertain and challenge in a few pages

Thanks, and kudos

Not that it really matters, but I gave the story thus far a five just now. And yet I found it more deeply

flawed the longer it went on. I mean, "boiling hot box"? I could go on but, hey, I gave it five stars just for

trying. That's because within the world of Literotica it probably deserves five stars, comparatively speaking. But it's a little like a shooting star that glows brilliantly at first and then eventually dims until you have to

look long and hard to find it. Along with Mark Twain and Vladimir Nabokov, Scott Fitzgerald wrote the great

American novel with Gatsby. But it's what Fitzgerald doesn't say that makes Gatsby truly brilliant. The problem

with this story and almost all others in Literotica is that thy don't know when to shut up. Usually they quickly devolve into caricatures of pornography. Every fucking cliche imaginable pops up in paragraph after

paragraph. It cheapens the story, robbing it of freshness and vitality and verisimilitude. Yes, I gave it a five.

The author is probably capable of a perfect SAT score on vocabulary. But he just can't help himself. In the

Story of O, Pauline Reage allows the reader to participate in the story by not overwriting. That's why O is

a classic piece of pornography and probably always will be. And why this story, despite the decent grammar,

spelling, style structure and usage will be quickly forgotten.

LOL @ anonymous: anybody who holds up The Story of O as a standard couldn't have possibly read it. Laughably poor writing, moreso for a published work. There are dozens of self-edited novels on Lit with more polished prose.

Anyway, this story is engaging so far, good stuff.

I would be too damn jealous to ever be able to let the girls have a diffrent man than me... There would be strict rules!!!

Although it sounds sexist, adding other men into the mix would be a deal breaker. I couldn't take it. Good story so far.

Looks as though it's heading to group sex at high speed.