All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 103'

This chapter had several wrong words - a bit sloppy. Am still enjoying the tale though.

Note - you appear to have a problem with the proper use of "who" versus "that". "Who" refers to people, "that" to non-human animals and things. I know, nit-picky. At least you are consistent.

Finally it has become tragic that you think this is writing. You sir are an abomination and a bore. Please end this already

The writer will end it when they are ready!

No one is required to read the stories.

By your "logic" only those predisposed to liking something are allowed to comment on it. Nice way to try and get a high rating.

disregard these ahs we wouldn't read it if we didn't like it.

"Tori knelt in front of me, and soon had my pants unbuckled and around my ankles as she sucked my tumescent cock into her teenage mouth. God, she was hot. She made love to me, focusing on just that one area for a well: the head, the crown, the shaft, and my scrotum. Her hands were as involved as well as her mouth. The entire time she stared up at me with her smiling eyes. I could feel the love and the lust at the same time, and reflected it back to her with my own."

to mister " You sir are an abomination and a bore"

HA ! if you dont like it go "bore" and " abominat" your self ;-)

i like it and for me its a 5 star !

You stopped editing. Several miscues