All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 42'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great but too short

Great but too short....I am always awaiting your next installment.

Thanks for the great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
AAAARRRRGGGGHHHH

Good grief get the story going I'm having withdrawal symptoms and I just finished please hurry

Paps

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Mark + Elsa = <33

I just need Mark and Elsa to end up being the great loving supporting couple they have been. StIll end up loving each other would be great as well.

NirosuNirosualmost 2 years ago

Some fail ass / incompetent security. I get that stopping the water in before happened would have been hard, but the fact that security didn't manage to catch the guy shows they aren't capable of doing their jobs for sure.

The conflict of the stalker is good but the level of incompetency in security is hard to believe

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...