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by SteveWallace

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Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesover 7 years ago
I noticed a little glitch -

Don't know if there was supposed to be more of the story in this chapter - this last page had two sets of the same information, one following the other...

Still, A GOOD STORY!

dozendozenover 7 years ago
Great story

As much as I like the rapidity with which new chapters appear, I do feel a little more editing is desirable. There were several paragraphs repeated on the last page.

papabear4589papabear4589over 7 years ago
I love The story

I love the story keep up the good work.

SteveWallaceSteveWallaceover 7 years agoAuthor
AUTHOR'S NOTE

THE COPY THE AUTHOR SUBMITTED TO LITEROTICA DID NOT CONTAIN DUPLICATE PARAGRAPHS (as found on p. 2 of the posted version). Sorry.

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