by SteveWallace
First half of the chapter sets it in April, but the second half is in November?
I have enjoyed all of your stories. When writing a story this long it can be easy to mix up months or names. This isn't a novel being published with a publisher and proof readers. It is remarkable that you keep all the names, places, events, etc. as consistent as you do. I always disregard comments by anyone named anonymous. You put your name on your story, but they choose to hide behind anonymous. Let them try to write a story and see how difficult it can be to do. Keep up the good work.
Thoroughly enjoying the story. The days without a new chapter are a little less happy for me.
Thank you for writing!