All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 88'

by SteveWallace

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amritaloveramritaloverabout 7 years ago
Deflowering Ceremony?

I like the virgin story line, yet getting The Experience for the first time would ruin her...in a good way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Mark and the Story Line

Mark and the baby are a ????? His part before and since the baby coming has been little to none. He has one liners concerning his interest in the new person in the group. Seems strange to me. It seems that some of this story line should be reigned in, because it repeats itself in so many of these chapters. Nothing that is new to interest further reading. Too many people in the story line with too much of the same things.

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...