by SteveWallace
it seems to me that Elsa should be more sure of Mark's love and acceptance by now including considering the plane as her's and Mark's; not just Marks. her reaction regarding the plane crash (even knowing that she had done everything possible) doesn't seem to gel with someone who is Phillip Emerson's mother and Mark's obvious No. 1 woman. Her reaction seems to me to be someone who is newer to the family. this is only an afterthought. I love the story and hope it goes on for a long time.
I can understand PART of the emotions Elsa is experiencing ... PTSD is just that! The traumatic stress does not have to be from war experience. It will come from ANY traumatic experience, and I do believe that hitting the ground at 150 knots (that is about 170 + mph) is NOTHING to be sneezed at! YES, the Cessna was destroyed; the important thing is that the Cessna can be replaced - it is material! The souls on board that aircraft CANNOT be replaced. Pure chance caused that landing gear damage - or did "chance" have some human assistance? THAT is the QUESTION! And now, The Rest of the Story....
I can't wait for this stupid story to be over. At this point who other then the author is being entertained. If the operators of Literotica are paying attention kill this drivel already. No story should be more then 25 chapters....50 is over the top....100 is down right idiotic. Pisses me off to see this nonsense in the new stories category every day.
to >>> Anonymous Ridiculous I can't wait for this stupid story to be over <<<
you dont HAVE to read it. OK, it has its up and downs - eg the 80+ orgy - but overall is an entertaining reading and for me a 5 star voting every time ;-)