by SteveWallace
What's boring is your fag ass comments. YOU must really be a asshole fag cocksucker
While the story line ebbs and flows, this chapter is a great example of extended erotic fiction. I have been looking forward to this scene with Tori and the next one for weeks. It is a great read, ironically without any sex. For those who want something else, there are plenty of other wham-bam stories here to read instead.
Will she get The Experience on prom night? It would spoil her for life....
I am 67 years old and a hopeless romantic. Bring it On!
I noticed despite your rant you didn't actually say anything about the story. I guess you couldn't find anything good to post about it.
God I'm sick of this repetitious and unoriginal story. Beyond anything, it belongs in Novellas, not group.
I really enjoyed the series and was looking forward to some type of conclusion as the ones with the circle and other works. How did the day go? Did she get to play with her sisters? Well agree there is some repetition it does seem to grow all the time.
The final chapters, 100 thru 105, are between chapters 10 and 11.
It's a quirk of the website, nothing more.
Holy crap monkies! You need an editor and about 97 less chapters. What I skimmed was just awful.
LOL, such nasty comments from the anonymous crowd but 99.9% of us loved the story.
dear detractors, if you dont like it you dont HAVE to read this 110 chapter story,
yes, it has its ups and downs but overall I definitely LIKE it !
only the part about de 80+ orgy got a 4 star from me, al others a 5 star ;-)