All Comments on 'Bimbos and Debts'

by ChrystalWynd

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domthesubdomthesubalmost 16 years ago
looking forward to pt 2

nice, and truly looking forward to next instalment

latin_loverlatin_loveralmost 16 years ago
Clever

Very clever, good use of first person perspective, watching Amber turn into a bimbo as the story progressed, good dialogue as well, a good story overall

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great story, not erotic-but damn funny

The dialogue made me laugh especially towards the end when the bimbo couldn't even pay attention to the conversaiton. LOL

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Liked it - a lot!

I normally do not like magical transformation, instead preferring surgical change. But this story was good. Like that it was non-consensual, dirty, and at the end everything did not work out for the victim.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Bimbo and stories!

Love all your stories, especially when you bimbofy women! How about a story about a high powered lawyer who is bimbofied to replace a slut for a pimp who she helped get jailed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Love all your stories; that would be an excellent story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Wonderful integration!

So amazing how you integrate all the themes of your stories! The mind-vs-passion thing is great! I so get into the thoughts of the 'bimbos'! The objective thought versus the raw passion and need of sexual fulfillment is exhilarating.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
More

Really really good more please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
more please

Great story, wish it went a little bit further after she went full bimbo. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
SOOOOO dumb

I'm still laughing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Very Funny

and pretty clever plot line. Well written. Thanks for sharing your work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great as always

I notice that despite the loathing so many of your perpetrators have for the women they bimbify (and rightfully so) the "victims" rarely seem to suffer. Not that that is the point of course. However I thought you might try slowing the mental transformations and exploring cognitive dissonance with your transforming character a bit more. As always well done😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great

Good story. Would like to read more about her paying her debts

jimjam69jimjam69over 4 years ago
Hilarious!

Well written. Good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Incredible

Since Amber enjoys it so much, let her stay that way and everyone's happy.

VirginioVirginio12 months ago

One of my favourite bimbo stories! Would love to read more from you.

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