All Comments on 'Biological...Father?'

Just enough of a plot to keep you interested! Can never have to many sexy she-male tales that are about fun and sex! Way to many stories about guies wanting to get in touch w/ their inner fem and become someone else "girl". Hope you enjoy writting them as much as we enjoy reading them!

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Dirty old pervs wanna know :)

...write a sequel. So curious as to what happens next.

This was very well written and believable. The way things progressed and how they kinda fell into having sex was very enjoyable and erotic. It ended rather abruptly though, which is a shame, but there seems to be an opening for more. It would be awesome if you were to write a sequel, there is so much potential here for a successful and highly scintillating series.

This is such a sexy story so please continue writing.

Please tell us more. This story struck a biological need with me. I yearn to hear about Danica's wife, Danica and her daughter,

damn the was a harsh cut off it as all so hot

that was so awesome! more please :)

OMG! nice cliff hanger, but finish the storrrry! LMFAO

Oh, come on! This gotta be continued, no matter what! Pleeeease,,,!

this needs to be continued.

most definitely.

interesting set up. i think biological father and daughter should get together.

Girl finds the dad she never knew is a woman then ducks him? I wish I could have given this a 0 instead of a star, it's that bad.

Pretty good... wish the cock was bigger.

Also would have been a good twist if the daughter started fisting the dad while she was kissing his ass.

I love the story. But we need a sequel please!

Forget huh he's to thin between the ears. I enjoyed your story can't wait to see how the wife handles this situation hope it goes well for all three of them. Tami/Tom.

The mind reels at the possibilities. Also, I liked the normal-sized cock. Not everyone has a redwood tree between their legs, part 2 now, please!

can't wait to find out how many women she impregnated with her super sexy genes.

"I was saving up money to move to a state that would allow me to change my birth certificate to 'Danica.' "?

Nice try, but no. You don't get to choose your own birthplace, much like you don't get to choose your own birth parents. Move to another province if you like, but your birth certificate will be issued from wherever you were born, not wherever you live now.

Congrats!!!

i get the feeling she has many half brothers and sisters to fuck.

MAKE ANOTHER ONE

I really liked how hot the sex was and how neither of the two were repulsed by it. I hoe that you can take the plot through a more romantic sex comedy angle. Looking forward to more of this story soon!

Please, please write a second part, I loved it and thought it was great. I really want to know what happenes to the wife.

Great story. Interesting plot and worthy of continuation. So many ways to go with this.

Everything would depend on how they navigated the problem of the wife. Looking for half-sibling is a good idea. Maybe a mini convention of the relatives. You might end up with a gathering of clones. But there is always a chance that the other parent has the dominant genes, her best friend at home may have been a half-sibling.

I guess I'm pitching for chapter 2!

It has been long enough to come back and revisit this story.

Fantastic!!

This story definitely wants more chapters.

I had such high hopes, and then you threw incest into what was a lovely story. Just not my thing. Couldn't finish it. Oh, well... Maybe the next one... You write so well, too

This is just insanely hot. You have taken taboo to a whole new place. Well done.

A beautifully developed and told story. Good English, grammar (editing?) and atmosphere; develops believably for even a non-trans-gender person who just likes a well done, very much believable 'adventure' into that world. Now I'll go back and read others - surely the aim of a writer who knows she (he's?) doing a pretty good job. I could believe I was there, enjoying!! Be encouraged!

Shimi.