All Comments on 'Bird of Prey Ch. 04'

The visual image of a nude male wrist bound to a pole his nude back beaten until he screams his submission.I have a certain male author I imagine in that position cumming against the pole as he screams out his submission.I hope he feels shamed when seeing he is being exposed for what he now is.

...I only wish they were my true life experiences! If it shamed me, I wouldn't write it; it is my desire for absolute submission to the superior female that drives me on! Oh that there's a woman out there somewhere who could oblige!

Tell me Sputnik dear have you ever masturbated on a female's boot while her friends giggled?I would oblige you this act if you beg here in public for it.You say nothing shames you in your stories.Well I want to humiliate you.I want all to read the word of this author as he grovells fot my attention in this public venue.Now kneel on the floor and type out a virtual submission to my will and my desires.Tell all how you will submit before my friends and spend on my shoes only to next lick them clean.Admit how you crave to wear my collar and chains.Say you want to be my slave totally controlled in future writings on this site.Books called slave to one of his female readers.Author shamed in his own fantasy world.1Dz

@ Anonymous:

Why the fuck do you guys read four chapters of a story when in the first chapter it's pretty clear that this doesn't belong to you? It's a great Femdom Fantasy Fiction. And your trashy comments make no sense at all when you write it on the fourth chapter.

poor sputnik all alone and wanking in his bedroom as he writes the same drivel over and over again.

...you're a little tardy with your opinion; it's been several years since I wanked over this one - please try to keep up.

I would love to endure a whipping from a mature female beaten into total submission my own will of no consequence my body welted forced to beg mercy of course getting none

But there are some glaring spelling mistakes. Read before posting.

I do realize most wankers will be so caught up in the story that they will overlook them or be too thick to notice.

Re 'Love the story' - Anonymous; 'realize'? There's a glaring spelling mistake if ever there was one!