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76fellow4876fellow482 months ago

What was the address of that restaurant?

I haven't read a story for some time that moved at a pace along with the story line like this one.

Well presented.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

littlewilly1littlewilly12 months ago

Looking forward to the next chapter

oldsage_1oldsage_12 months ago

Yeah! I would like the address of that restaurant also! Since you twisted my arm yes, I would like to know more about these folks! More please! As many chapters as you would like to share.

Cheers

SAGE

Buster2UBuster2U2 months ago

10 big blazing stars! It was the magic ring! Buster2U

WoodencavWoodencav2 months ago

Awesome ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Darque_LyteDarque_Lyte2 months ago

I am very curious where this story will go. Was fun to read.

uboat1uboat12 months ago

Great start! Oh the possibilities

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Fantastic, great scenes, and a mystery partly revealed.

Rob_RoyaleRob_Royale24 days ago

An amazing fantasy, well told.

AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

Your stories all have a common problem in that your paragraphs are too long which makes the story too difficult to read easily.

They may be good, but I can't focus on them for that reason.

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