by Samuelx
I enjoyed the storytelling, however, a small inconsistency took me out of the action. George is described as a Black man, yet his wife says she has never had sex with a Black man.
Aside from the minor slip concerning the wife's claim never to have had a Black man, the writing was strong and the sex well told. I must confess the story left me a little unsatisfied. It felt like it ended far too soon and I'd wished the author could have focused on the relationship between Lola and her husband and the main character. There was definitely potential there. I hope the author will consider giving us more.
I love your stories. I would love if you wrote one for me/about me. Fuck these haters!