All Comments on 'Bisexual Orgy Birthday'

Very sexy birthday presents. Too bad Janie didn't cum along for the fun too.

I really enjoyed the story. With my name being Steve and my wife Dee, I was fantasizing that we were the ones enjoying the birthday party orgy. Wish I knew find a Janine that could arrange such an erotic gift. I am headed to look for something for my wife tomorrow for our anniversay, so now I know where to look. lol Would love to hear more of your escapades.

Great story line and loved the sex...To bad my wife wasn't like Dee...Thanks for the hard-on...

This must be every man's dream, to see his wife with another woman or two, who then are willing to accomodate his cock as well. I've enjoyed some memorable threesomes, but never a foursome such as this. Incredible episode!

I suspect that there is more than an element of truth in this story, Steve. It had me "standing" for the entire length. What a lucky guy you are, being married to Dee.

To bad my wife can't fuck anymore. Here I am with a hard on that would choke a horse and she can't do anything about it. There was a time that I would be sucked and fucked into oblivion, but not now. I can only dream now.

I'm going to leave your story open on my laptop for my wife to find (and hopefully read) !

Very erotic story !

The story was HOT, HOT, HOT, from start to finish. Most importantly..it was quite plausible and tasteful. All of the characters were quite sexy and attractive. An easy and enjoyable read.

That was one hell of a story. If it was me with 3 willing women, I would have had to eat each of their assholes out completeley. Savoring each ones taste.

Thanks.

Thanks Steve for sharing. You are a gifted writer,kinda helps that you have such a wonderfully sensual and erotic subject. Keep up the Good work.

Chuck/Jan in Wisconsin

Wrong usage of words, wrong words used, misspellings.

Ugh.

Learn the difference between accept and except. To start!

Loved the story and of course it brings about a very happy ending!

I liked the story, but you need to find someone to edit for you. There were many grammatical errors as well as typographical errors. The errors detracted from my enjoyment of the story.

awesome i almost came in my pants

I THINK THIS IS VERY A HOT STORY

I loved your story. Its Erotic and sexy. I was inspired to finish the story. Well done.

I've had several 3 some and a few 4 some orgies but they were never this hot. This was very well written.

Enjoyed the tale very much, but it ended a little too abruptly. Will the secretary get rewarded?

Extremely hot. My girlfriend also enjoyed the story!

Great story.......made my dick rock hard !!!

You have left me wanting more of this tale. Very hot

Definitely needed some editing, lots of typos.

And it ended suddenly, when clearly there was more action ready to unfold.

But it was still a good, fast paced stroke piece ;->

I like the story ... enjoying the thought of a hotel adventure.

Should you have a few of the photos you mentioned in the story, it would be great to see them -- maybe you can rework the story by adding a few of them in and putting this into the Illustrated category.

What a fucking hot story, loved every sentance, I was hard throughout. I so wanted Janine amd the young girl from the shop to be in the fun and games. Well written and great fun that I wish my life included but will never be the case.

this was hot as fuck! wish Tanya had fucked steve with a cpls fingers or even a strap on !!! will be reading more of ur stories!

love from Cactus from Perth, WA

A wonderful hot and well written story. Love reading your works it makes me really hard and horny. Thanks!

A wonderful erotic, hot and well written story! Got really horny after reading the first few minutes of the story.

Great to see people still enjoying my stories. Should I start writing again? I have lots more adventures to write about now.

yes you should keep writing, in fact a part two to this story would be great....

in the beginning of the hotel part of the story you said they took out two strap-ons, maybe both the women fuck the husband and wife side by side? then their is another knock on the door an hr later... and a few men show up, and again they get fucked side by side...

Simply fuckalicious