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Anonymousover 10 years agoPretentious
Your writing style is pretentious. And over done. Tone it down some and you have the makings of an alright story.
AmazonBeauty1966over 5 years agoWOW
Don't listen to pretentious!!! That was incredible ... Hot ... Soul shaking!! Your attention to detail and blending their love making into the storm ~ I could practically feel the rain!! Thank you Sir!!!
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