All Comments on 'BJ Bliss Ch. 01 Sucks in the City'

Brilliant premise, brilliantly execution, brilliant plot, brilliantly written...just plain brilliant! Five stars, easily.

I love the idea, the execution, the style... you have a winner here! Hope it goes on for many chapters.

Thank you so much for the positive feedback! This is the tip of the iceberg, I have chapters 2-4 on deck. Suggestions are always welcome, the later chapters in this series are still in progress.

The writing was great. Fun storyline. Very erotic. I'm also curious to see what happens between Katrin and Felicia. That looks like an interesting storyline to come.

Great job!

I need it! Really interesting story line and I like the dynamic between Malena and Katrin. Their demonstration for Peter proved to be humourous and down right hot. Can't wait to see BJ Bliss flourish!

Very nicely done. Enjoyed it immensely. Need to step up my own writing. Looking forward to Chap 2.

Amazingly desscriptive erotic story, beautifuly written and edited. Adore the characters, Karin and Malena and so looking forward to following their exploits at BJ Bliss.