by Samuelx
many times and have been put off by them, so never bothered to read, however i thoroughly enjoyed this read, (women of all races don't do it for me lol) but i liked how u described Emilie positive and proud, i could vision her and Natalie, and Emilies struggles, and i like how she never showed that smalled mindedness got to her in front of people, that's something i do all the time, never let a person know that they may have had some negative response. don't know that i'll read anymore of your stories lol, but i did like this one
--- do you make such an issue of someone's race? It does't matter a shit whether this character is black, white, pink, yellow or purple with green spots. All that matters is whether she's a good cheerleader or not. By stressing the race, you are not only being racist yourself, but inevitably you only encourage further racism - see the first ignorant comment that appeared after this story was posted. Freddy
Thought provoking. Human. Your character seems unknowingly, blissfully hypocritical. I liked it.